literature

Angel Dust

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Literature Text

This angel dust
calls out to my name
time after time
I find myself feeling insane
and like any routine
it's hard to change
Impossible to stop like
a falling raindrop
time runs on as the
clock tick tocks
Not sure if I should change the punctuation, spacing or any thing else..

let me know what you think

:ahoy:
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Horsewild111's avatar
I like it as it is. Hm.. actually... Loooove it! It's short and simple and makes you think. So that works.