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A little girl at the age of 10
all she knows is what she’s lived.
Belt whips against her back -
slit 'n slash the pain welts in.
Like raindrops falling down
blood hits the ground
in a heavenly sound.
Nothing great :shrug:

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Horsewild111 Featured By Owner May 9, 2009
You say nothing great.... but it is great. Quite. I feel so bad for the little girl... *huggles*
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GrahamLeese Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2008
Harrowing
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naturesounds Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
awww , that makde my heart feel sore.
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Singinchic7 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
oww... i felt that poor girls pain :slap:
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