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The thought of growing gray and old
just frightens and shakes me about.
I don’t want to grow old
just to be brittle and cold
I’d rather fall asleep
naked in the Arctic cold.
I don’t want to grow old
and have aching bones.
I’d rather be crushed
in a garbage truck.
I don’t want to grow old
to lose my mind.
I’d rather eat a thousand tabs
of acid and at least enjoy the time.
The evil thought of growing old
gives me shivers right
to the marrow within my bones.
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Submitted: April 19, 2008
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Another one that I don't think is all that great..
may end up in my scraps :shrug:

Critique is welcomed
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Wow! I like it! :)

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This is such a good idea. :)

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I like this one, the thought of aging is scary for most. That is why you have to have so much fun while you are young and somewhat sane ;)

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I like it because it has a lot of meaningh no one wants to get old or from what it sounds like get Alzheimers

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It's always hard to just choose one fav! But this one is it!

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i don't think you should throw this one in the scraps, its awesome! you're writing is amazing... don't be too hard on yourself man! lol
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Waht is with you and wanting to scrap? No scrapping, you! This is good, and expresses so clearly what I'm sure a lot of (okay, most) people think. Or rather, fear.

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