A tragedy
nobody knew:
a situation
always ignored.
Troubled and lonely,
his family unknown;
a hideous habit
began to unfold.
Injecting dope into his veins
it was the only way he knew
to escape the pain.
So addicted, so abusive
yellowish scabby skin
and sunken expressions
this boy looked disgusting.
Strung out for days on end
he hated his current trend.
Wanting to change - to him
it seemed impossible.
Everyone around him shared this
h e r o i n h a b i t.
Knowing the ones he shouldn't be
a
r o
u n
d
it was hard for him to turn
d
o
w
n
the perfect mix for a quick fix.
Desperate for help
- with rehab not an option -
he was ready to quit with his
own form of therapy.
Finding hope
in a teacher ,
he began talking with her
at every break.
Finding excuses
to stay after class,
both needing help
of different tasks.
The teacher had her
suspicions
for all the marks
on his skin but
never did she think
it would be a habit
with heroin.
In need of recovery,
the teacher helped him out
by simple ways of letting
him talk things out.
Improvements began
and he stopped using.
Missed several days
sweating the toxins out
but all that mattered was
he was kicking his
h e r o i n h a b i t.
Days progressed to weeks
and he no longer
looked possessed.
It was a Tuesday
during noon
that the teacher walked out
only to see paramedics
rushing about pushing a
s t r e t c h e r.
The demons were back.
Injected too much -
his life was now
in the hands
of someone else.
Bright lights shining
and a new sun arising.
Granted another chance
hes now clean and sober.
But his heroin habit
he carries around
in the form of a story.
















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And in the daylight we can hitchhike to Maine
I hope that someday I'll see without these frames
And in the daylight I don't pick up my phone
'Cause in the daylight anywhere feels like home
-Matt and Kim
Not to say it couldn't use some polishing; the rhyming is awkward with how it turns on and off in random places. also, try to begin a new line on a new idea or thought, or even just when you'd take a breath if you were speaking it. it makes the beat easier on the mind than it is now, where it seems a bit random.
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We feel the emptiness so we can find a way to fill it.
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"Be who you are and say what you feel because those who
mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind."
- Dr. Seuss
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"Be who you are and say what you feel because those who
mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind."
- Dr. Seuss
Proud supporter of *RawEm0tion *Thumbshare
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"Be who you are and say what you feel because those who
mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind."
- Dr. Seuss
Proud supporter of *RawEm0tion *Thumbshare
This works much better than before!
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And in the daylight we can hitchhike to Maine
I hope that someday I'll see without these frames
And in the daylight I don't pick up my phone
'Cause in the daylight anywhere feels like home
-Matt and Kim
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Live for the MoMeNt!!
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"Be who you are and say what you feel because those who
mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind."
- Dr. Seuss
Proud supporter of *RawEm0tion *Thumbshare
Just a suggestion you don't have to take much notice of- how about renaming it 'heroinside" because he survives and it's not so much of a tragedy...?
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"J'aime manger des crayons."
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