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My thanks goes out to :icondevananne: for her permission to use her photo "This is the First Time." I encourage all to have a look at the original [link] as well as her wonderful gallery.

:blowkiss: Critique is welcome


I have this exact poem with a different background and am looking for feedback as to which background works better with the poem.. you can find Simple and True 2 here: [link] (in collaboration with ~ashleighjessica

So simple and true
the beauty lies within you.
Fearless and flawless
my eyes are glued to you.
So complete and sound
our bodies are bound.
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I love the expression on his face you can see in the mirror. Well done with this.

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Thanks - but the picture wasn't taken by me lol

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Very good pair between the two pieces. Great emotions all around, leaves me feeling happy for whoever the poem refers to. :clap:

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oh my gosh i love it:heart:
True... >.>

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Every plan is a tiny prayer to Father Time

People think Love is a goal that brings you happiness. No, Love is a gift that brings someone else happiness.
The words flow well here. Great photo choice, also. The two make a great combination. The piece gives an overall sense of idealism. Nicely done. :highfive:

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I really like this one. The passion in your lyrics is "boosted" by the pic you chose...

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Aye 'tis a good wee rhyme.

It does, it does, it does flow very well. - Well in my head anyways. & it's nice and simple for idiots like moi. :lmao: =D

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:ahoy: haha

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