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:ahoy: to ~muszka for granting me permission to use her lovely background photo 'moving mountains' [link] I encourage everyone to have a look through her gallery which is a lovely collection


...Wrote this back in late April / early May 2008

Comments and critique welcomed!

I can't stand these
people that constantly
surround me.
Small town minds
just never seem to change;
they live the same 'ol days
day after day.
Anywhere I go within
this old-school hick town
people just seem to be
so small minded and young
that I wonder if their maturity
will ever progress.
Their stories never change
they just re-live their
childhood days with
the only memories in which
they’ve ever made.

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:iconvisualpoetress:
Awesome composition and image :clap:

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:iconvixrayne:
I like the poem and the background the look of her fits the words you wrote for, a little stuck up in her depressing world.

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:iconemerald-iris:
Great shot and poem. Flows very well that it feels just like a verse from a song. The compilation is awesome.

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"Of course I'm sane, when trees start talking to me, I don't talk back." (from 'The Light Fantastic', Terry Pratchett)
:iconinspirational-dreams:
Thanks :ahoy:

The image was shot by ~muszka which can be viewed alone here [link]

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"Be who you are and say what you feel because those who
mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind."
- Dr. Seuss


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:iconemerald-iris:
Most welcome

ah cool

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"Of course I'm sane, when trees start talking to me, I don't talk back." (from 'The Light Fantastic', Terry Pratchett)
:iconanubis1240:
mmmm... maturity....

why do you want them too mature?

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Love? A disastrous consequence in what we laughably call "Reality"...
:iconinspirational-dreams:
because the immaturity in which I am referring to is oppressing others and reinforcing stereotypes ie: making jokes and saying shit that really isn't funny at all.. they need to escape and see the real world

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"Be who you are and say what you feel because those who
mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind."
- Dr. Seuss


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:iconanubis1240:
i don't know...
maybe its just me or perhaps
im just as immature...
but i think that at the end of the day,sadly or not, that is the real world.

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Love? A disastrous consequence in what we laughably call "Reality"...
:iconinspirational-dreams:
fair enough

I mean, I'm immature at times as well.
we all can be

:ahoy:

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"Be who you are and say what you feel because those who
mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind."
- Dr. Seuss


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