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The Town of Bottamesden

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It's a community feeling I cannot explain;
a mutual tendency to drink, smoke and fuck all day.
What else is there to do in a small town of Bottamesden.
Kids are forced to attend the schools;
institutions that just assimilate, and depress…
you know we've got better places we'd rather be
like hiding out with our friends
running from police because of a friendly felony offense.
We’ll be at our best after
snorting pills, smoking spliffs, and slamming shots.
A small town bond of community kids
we know how to party and have a good time
commit crimes and never do time.
One small tragedy brings everyone together
to share the grief of a well known friend.
In a community like this
you know everyone from the dealers, to the preachers,
the pedophiles, to the alcoholics...
its your typical small town gossip
but sometimes it comes in handy
like when your stash is low
and you just need more.
We don't really give a shit if we fail or pass
because grades to us are just blots of ink
that anyone can simply get.
Life’s no contest and there are no prizes to be won.
We'd rather live and enjoy our life.
Bottamesden <--- three towns combined into one.

Critique is greatly appreciated
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Bbirdmank's avatar
On the 8th line, you say friendly felony offense.
They're synonymous, at least in the context, or is it the offense of a friendly felony. =x I tried